Merge pull request 'Human Edits to MCP and Ollama' (#17) from mcp_and_ollama__local_assistant_is_close into master

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@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Authors: Andrew Ridgway
 Summary: An Exploration of the Model Context Protocol and its potential to revolutionise how we interact with AI
 
 ## Human Introduction
-So for today's blog I've upped the model paramters on both the editors and a couple drafters.. and I have to say I think we've nailed what my meagre hardware can achieve in terms of content production. The process take 30 more minutes to churn now but that quality output more than makes up for it. For context we are now using:
+So for today's blog I've upped the model paramters on both the editors and a couple drafters.. and I have to say I think we've nailed what my meagre hardware can achieve in terms of content production. The process take 30 more minutes than before to churn now but that quality output more than makes up for it. For context we are now using:
 
 - _Editor_: Gemma3:27b
 - _Journalist 1_: phi4-mini:latest
@@ -16,9 +16,9 @@ So for today's blog I've upped the model paramters on both the editors and a cou
 - _Journalist 3_: deepseek-r1:14b <-> _I know but it **is** good even if it won't talk about Tiananmen Square_
 - _Journalist 4_: qwen3:14b
 
-As you can see if you compare some of the other blogs this Blog has really nailed tone and flow. Some of the content was wrong.. it though I "wrote" [MCPO](https://github.com/open-webui/mcpo), I didn't, I wrapped it, and the sign off was very cringe but  otherwise the blog is largely what came out from the editor. 
+As you can see if you compare some of the other blogs this blog has really nailed tone and flow. Some of the content was wrong.. it thought I "wrote" [MCPO](https://github.com/open-webui/mcpo), I didn't, I wrapped it, and the sign off was very cringe but otherwise the blog is largely what came out from the editor. 
 
-It's very exciting to see as I get better hardware and can run better models I fully see this being something that could potentially not need much editing on this side.. have to see how it goes moving forward... anyways, without futher adieu, Behold.. MCP and Ollama - A blog _**ABOUT**_ AI _**BY**_ AI
+As I get better hardware and can run better models, I fully see this being something that could potentially not need much editing on this side.. have to see how it goes moving forward... anyways, without futher adieu, Behold.. MCP and Ollama - A blog _**about**_ AI _**by**_ AI
 
 ## Introduction: Beyond the Buzzwords – A Real Shift in AI